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Melody Yulieth
10/5/2016 01:16:05 pm
I liked Shiloh the most because it showed that animal abuse is not right ,and to stop animal abuse because they are living things to so that means they could feel pain to.
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Richard Vasquez
10/5/2016 01:17:37 pm
From Unit1, I liked Shiloh.I liked Shiloh because I liked how Marty took care of Shiloh.Also it shows why not to abuse a dog.
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Cristian Grande
11/2/2016 11:21:18 am
I agree because a lot of people don't care about their animals and they abuse them. That's why people should stop animal abuse.
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Fernando Quijada
11/2/2016 11:33:14 am
I agree with you Richard.You should take good care of your pets.You should love your pets as a family member.Abuse an animal means you don't care about them.
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Francisco Sandoval
10/5/2016 01:18:04 pm
The reading that I liked the most was A Sled on Boston Common.I liked this story the most because it had bravery.I personally like stories with action and bravery.Also because it is interesting.
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Cassidi Arnold
10/5/2016 01:18:27 pm
The story in unit one I liked the most would be Shiloh.I liked it because it is about how people care for animals.Also,I liked it because it shows how careful people are with animals.It also gives you clues about how the dog is really scared of Judd Travers.Another reason is because people need to not do bad things to animals.I love how Marty took care of ShilohThat is my favorite story in unit one.
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Samantha Aguliuz
10/5/2016 01:18:34 pm
The story that I liked was Shiloh. I loved that one because it talked about animals. Also what made me sad was when Judd Travers abused his own dog.I also liked it because it gives you ideas about rescuing animals from the streets and caring for them as your own pets. I loved how Marly saved shiloh from the streets.That is my favorite unit right now.
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Jasmine Beltran
10/5/2016 01:18:41 pm
The story I enjoyed the most would be Going Someplace Special. I enjoyed it the most because it was interesting. Also because she enjoys the library and she doesn't care of her or someone else skin color. It made me want to tell her that it doesn't matter about the outside, but the inside.It inspired me to tell other people that judge themselves and other people that that doesn't matter.
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Kimberly Gonzalez
11/2/2016 11:13:14 am
I also liked Going Someplace Special. It was interesting how people used to act. Since their skin color was different from the others they treated them badly. It is also interesting because it's a narrative but it took place during a real time period.
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kimberly Saravia
10/5/2016 01:18:46 pm
The reading the I really liked in Unit 1 Taking A Stand is Shiloh. I like it because it was very interesting and Marty was not afraid of Judd Travers when he came to "rescue" Shiloh by saying that Marty hit Shiloh but actually, Judd hit him.
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Jose Guillen
10/5/2016 01:19:48 pm
My favorite story was Shiloh . Shiloh was my favorite because It has a good story to the book but they leave me hanging at the end of the story because Judd Travers just leaves no actual ending but it was good for a short story theirs still more books of Shiloh
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Natalie Murillo
10/5/2016 01:20:48 pm
The story I liked the best was Shiloh because it shows how you can stand up for each other. I also enjoyed it because it shows you that you can stand up animals .Another reason that I enjoyed it was that you can relate to Marty and how he would keep the dog so that Judd Travers wouldn't abuse him.
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Fernando Quijada
10/5/2016 01:22:16 pm
I enjoyed Shiloh the most.I enjoyed it because it shows what can happen when you are kind to animals and what happens when you abuse them.I also liked because it also shows friendship between Marty and Shiloh.
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Jorge Cruz
11/2/2016 11:14:19 am
My favorite story is as well ''Shiloh'' because of some of the same reasons.Shiloh was just like you said a story that showed could happen when you abuse animals witch is why this is one of my favorite stories in unit 1. I agree with your reasoning of why ''Shiloh'' is one of your favorite story and I liked it for the same reasons.
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Haide Vera
10/5/2016 01:22:51 pm
My favorite was Shiloh. I liked it because its's showing that Marty really does love Shiloh. I even love it that he takes a risk up to Judd Travers. That really is caring. I also love the cool pictures they have. Hope you have another great blog Mr. Cabrera!!
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Alejandra Velasquez
10/5/2016 01:23:07 pm
The story that I enjoyed the most from taking a stand was GOING SOMEPLACE SPECIAL.It was my favorite because I like how Tricia Ann stood up for herself and never gave up on what she wanted.Also, I like how she was brave enough to defend herself from white people talking back to her in a rude way.I also like how Tricia Ann's grandma is a nice and kind person who let Tricia Ann go by herself some place special.I like how Tricia Ann knew her rights and told the white person that everyone is welcomed to do what they want to do.
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Diego Santos
11/2/2016 11:20:12 am
Well I agree with you. That story is interesting in many ways. It makes me think of the 1900s. Also its interesting how you put detail in it like brave and rude. I really like the way you described the story.
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Mia Perez
10/5/2016 01:23:15 pm
The reading from Unit 1 that I enjoyed the most is Shiloh. I liked that story because, as I was reading it, I wanted to see what happens next. In other words, it was very intresting.Another reason why I liked the story is because ,it had alot of heart in it. So that is the story that I liked from Unit 1 and the reason why I liked it.
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Kimberly Saravia
11/2/2016 11:13:16 am
I agree! I really love Shiloh! I also agree that the story has heart in it. I enjoyed it! Especially how we are reading the whole book because in Tresures, it only gave part of the book. !!!!!!!!STOP ANIMAL ABUSE!!!!!!
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Samantha aguiluz
11/16/2016 05:46:11 pm
Me too!!! I loved shiloh too!!! And as well
Angel Ocotecatl
10/5/2016 01:23:38 pm
The story I really liked was Shiloh. I liked Shiloh because it is a very interesting story. I also liked how the author described what was happening.The thing I really like was that the author made Judd Travers want his dog back which made it even more interesting.
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Richard Vasquez
11/2/2016 11:14:05 am
I also liked Shiloh.It was a very good story!I liked the part when Marty Preston ''helped'' Shiloh.I really want to see what happens to Marty andShiloh.
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Billy Moreno
11/2/2016 11:17:32 am
I also like the story shiloh
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Heidy Mejia
10/5/2016 01:24:40 pm
I liked Shiloh because I keep wanting to see if Judd Travers was goig to keep Shiloh.Also if Marty was going to stand up to Judd for poor Shiloh.I eve liked the story when it showed that Marty cared about Shiloh and wanted to help him.
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Ivanah Maldonado
11/2/2016 11:10:57 am
I agree with you Heidy Mejia poor Shilo being abused by someone and then being cared by someone nice is a story I would like to read.
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Billy Moreno
10/5/2016 01:24:45 pm
I like The Night of San Juan because the three girls helped Jose go to The Night of San Juan.I also liked it because the girl worked tougther to help a firend who always looked at the girls that played in the streets so the girl dicided to help him.
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Mr. Cabrera
10/5/2016 01:29:04 pm
I also like The Night Of San Juan. I liked it because it reminded me of traditions we used to celebrate as a family during Christmas. It brought back lots of memories. :)
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Arianna Ramirez
10/5/2016 01:25:04 pm
From Unit 1Taking A Stand I enjoyed reading Shiloh because Marty defends Shiloh from Judge Traver. Shiloh is scared of Judge Traver because he hits Shiloh.It is a very interesting and sad story.Marty and Shiloh have a connection.
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Justin Fox
10/5/2016 01:25:14 pm
My favorite story from unit 1 is Shiloh. Its my favorite one because its about a kid that helps a dog name Shiloh. He saves Shiloh because he is protecting him from Judd Travers. Then he is trying to get the money to pay for Shiloh's bill.So he can keep shiloh. Thats my favorite one in unit 1 for our reading.
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Mr. Cabrera
10/5/2016 01:30:47 pm
Shiloh was a good story to read and had a great character. It shows the struggles he goes thru to help out a poor defenseless animal. A good reading for all to read.
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Cristian
10/5/2016 01:25:33 pm
I really enjoyed Shiloh because it was a very interesting story. When Judd came to Marty's house he lost control because Shiloh was hurt. Judd said that Marty should have just return Shiloh, but Marty didn't and the dog got into a fight. Before Judd left Marty asked if Shiloh can stay. Judd said it was fine,but he has to return him on Sunday. That is why I liked Shiloh and it is one of my favorite stories.
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Cordae Germany
10/5/2016 01:27:02 pm
The reading I enjoyed the most was Shiloh. I enjoyed it the most because a dog named Shiloh keeps coming to a house with signs of abuse.Then a boy named Marty Preston helps him every time he goes to the house with his scares, bruses, or cuts. I liked that Marty would do anything for the dog.At the middle of the story we found out that a man named Judd Travers was abusing Shiloh but at the end of the story Marty ended up with Shiloh.
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Diego Santos
10/5/2016 01:28:09 pm
My favorite story from unit 1 is Maya Lin Architect in Memory. The reason i like that one is because it is expository. Also I didn't know about Maya Lin until i read the story. I was so facsinated by the things she does as an architect. She built 2 of the most visited memorials in New York. One was The Vietnam Memorial. The other one was The Civil Rights Memorial. She is special because she says she doesn't want to get in the memorials she wants to leave it and le the people see it.
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Francisco Sandoval
11/2/2016 11:09:08 am
I like this text as well.It is just tha I like Sleds on Boston Common better.Like I mentioned ealir I do like this story.It shows that people should always be remembered
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Andrew Huerta
11/2/2016 11:25:08 am
I also liked A Salute To Servicewomen because it shows people are equal.Also it shows how people are capable and it is very important to honor women and show everyone is capable and is strong from within and they have to push themselves to show they are capable and shouldn't be misjudged or underestimated we're here to live and learn not misjudge capability is what helps us stay living equaly.
Isai Gramajo
11/2/2016 11:23:04 am
I agree with you because when i read that story it gave me a lot of information about her memorials like the vietnam memorial.It also gave information about the civil rights memorial.
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Ivanah Maldonado
10/5/2016 01:28:59 pm
The reading from Unit 1, Taking A Stand , I personally enjoyed the most, is A Salute to Service Women. A Salute to Service Women is not a story that is long. It is a story that is short but very informative and honorable. That is one reason why I liked it. Another reason I personally liked it is because, I am a girl and I like when people and stories are created to honor and respect the rights of women. That is why I liked the story, A Salute to Service Women.
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Mr. Cabrera
10/5/2016 01:32:10 pm
I agree! A Salute to Service Women is one that everyone should read. We can't forget all the contributions that women have done for this great country of ours.
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Ivanah Maldonado
10/9/2016 05:54:26 pm
That is correct Mr.Cabrera.
Andrew Huerta
10/5/2016 01:30:58 pm
Unit one really had interesting stories,but one I really enjoyed reading was A Salute to Servicewomen.It really beat the fact that it proves wrong that women .are less stronger,weak,or unable to do certain things.The story also teaches a lesson or moral showing many things that men,women,boys,or girls should know,or if not reading the story will teach them a moral that they should and most likely remember it to show empathy and respect to others that deserve and also respect others this story was my favorite,but also important
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Cordae Germany
11/2/2016 11:16:25 am
I agree with you because people should also recognize the hard work women did.
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Jorge Cruz
10/5/2016 01:31:33 pm
My favorite story from taking a stand unit 1 would be have to be Shiloh .Shiloh would be my favorite because The way that the problem develops was interesting and how the characters were or acted was interesting as well.I liked how Shiloh a dog played a big role in this story. I like how Shiloh acted near Marty compared to Judd Travers which show Shiloh is being abused and that makes the story even more interesting.
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Justin Fox
11/2/2016 11:08:33 am
Shiloh is a good story it shows empathy.It was a really good story. !!!!!!!!!STOP ANIMAL ABUSE!!!!!!!!!
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